|Reviews for Reunion|
| WingzXFreedom chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
Thank you, Everyone for your compliments! I really appreciate them!
Slaaty About that line... I guess my wording is making it sound awkward? Well, I kinda rearranged the words in a sense to keep the rhyming scheme. hope it doesn't sound as awkward..;D
| E.S. Baudelaire chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
I love this. You are an amazing writer. It's hard for me to like a poem :)
| Slaaty chapter 1 . 9/28/2010
Cute rhyming scheme. And your poem brought up quite a few thought-inducing points. My only suggestion is to clean up this line:
"However, there are not all smiles on our faces"
Personally, I feel it sounds a bit awkward. Otherwise, good work! :)