This story is adorable. Please update soon!

You should totally write a sequel! I'd read it in a heartbeat! I just stayed up really late trying to finish this, it's sooooo awesome! I really hope you update soon! :)

Your story is so quirky! I love emma she's so hysterical. And grammar mistakes...honestly I didn't notice them because I get sidetracked by emma's crazy character so it's like an extension of her loony ways.

Update soon

Crimson

That was REALLY good! Please update! I can't wait to read more! :D

Ohmygosh I love it! I can't wait for you to write more! :)

she is hilarious...is emma modeled after someone or you just made her up? can't wait for the next chapter

okay this is hilarious! i would love to have a friend like emma!i'm sorry but i can't think of any twist right now .. i do like it as it is though

Oh, a party~

...on another note, if you do write something else, I'd LOVE to be a villain. especially with fangs. glow in the dark ones. or a cloak. :D

...because that's how i see myself...

OMGE! no! how could she do that! now lucas is gonna do the whole jealous dude act and fight with tom who is such a nice guy!

n GOODNESS the towel dropping shirt stripping scene was HILARIOUS.

hmm about the spin off. why not do tom or jason? since lucas is no doubt gonna get tgr with emma. idk abt names, but i personally use babynamesworld dot com for my characters most of the time. just do a meaning search. like if u think a lion describes ur character, search the meaning lion and names like leo will come up. :) hope that helps!

Love, love, love, love, love it! Can't wait for more!

hey um WHATS WRONG WITH HER why is she such a wierdo

So Emma kissed Tom to make Lucas jealous? Interesting...

Oh and WHEN is Lucas gonna break it off with Trina (if they're together...?)? :)

Update sonn!

~Ronnie~ stupid, STUPID exams! :O

I think Tom and Louise should get together

I love this story and as it is an outlet for you to write it is the same way for me to read.:) also if you have any troubles on names all you have to do is go to google and type in 'common male/female names' which ever you need and there is a lot there. maybe if you followed through on the cousin idea it could be like a delinquent cousin that moved in with her to get back on the right track and helps Emma by getting Trina to leave her alone. Have Emmas cousin be like really protective? just a thought hope i helped and please update i love readin this story it makes my day when i can get lost in the world others created and this is one of my favorites to escape to. :)

this is an interesting, funny story that i love.

update more, plz.