| Reviews for You're Just Too Good To Be True |
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   TicoTaco chapter 12 . 12/8/2015 Ohmygod I mean I felt that he was hiding something really fishy but not that way, nothing like that ever crossed my mind, and tbh I sympathise with him for getting taped and used like that, however I'm just so mad at him for what he said in the end that she was in a way his scapegoat. Shit man, I don't want more, I NEED more. |
| Guest chapter 11 . 12/5/2015 Brilliant chapter, as usual. |
| zzzeus11 chapter 11 . 12/4/2015 amazing! more please! |
| leavesfallingup chapter 6 . 12/4/2015 He did exactly the right thing. A good guy. |
| leavesfallingup chapter 1 . 12/4/2015 When the chapter started, I assumed that she was underage and therefore under her stepfather's control. If she is twenty-one, why hasn't she talked to the authorities? And it sounds like her mom knows and is more jealous than concerned? At least, being twenty-one, she shouldn't have any reason to go back under her mother's roof. |
| will chapter 11 . 12/3/2015 Update this or I swear I will find you and make you do it |
| Guest chapter 10 . 11/29/2015 No please say it isn't over. I feel like there is so much more that needs to happen. What happens when her mom and Carl show up at Grammy's house, and Carl is pissed? What happens to their Paris trip? What happens in their relationship next? Will there be a half-dozen Hayden's toddling around eventually? Please write more! I'm so intrigued, Ellie's character is so genuine it feels like. It feels like I know who she is by the way she talks and thinks and feels. Please write more. I'm excited to read more from you and this tale. :3 |
| TimeyWimeyBadWolf chapter 10 . 10/23/2015 keep writing, please! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2015 So in love with this story! Can't wait for the next chapter |
| shinju asuka chapter 10 . 9/30/2015 I like that Hayden told her his feeling and Elle told him about her stepdad. But Elle's reason to be intimate with him was not right... I don't know... For me it wasn't, but that reason is fitted her character. |
| TicoTaco chapter 10 . 9/29/2015 Well Hayden sure does take seducing to a whole new level, not that anyone's complaining. I have mixed feelings about how she feels the need to put out, it's like she feels that she has to because he is an amazing guy and all that but still she shouldn't feel pressured |
| shinju asuka chapter 9 . 9/15/2015 Oh my... I hope she wouldn't meet her stepdad! |
| Neo Rulez chapter 1 . 9/13/2015 This story was very adorable! I am already in love with Hayden and Ellie already! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 9/13/2015 Oh my god I am on edge right now! I have to know what happens next please update as soon as you can! I can't wait for more, and you are an insanely talented writer! |
| smrae chapter 9 . 9/13/2015 Double update and so much drama. Definitely left us with a cliffhanger lol. Can't wait for the next chapter. Hope she doesn't have to see that awful man. Please save the day Hayden. |