Aww... did you really have to end it there? *whining voice with puppy dog eyes* I wanna read more... :-) seriously, update real soon. (I'm a writer, too, though, so I know how hard it is to write a whole chapter quickly).

Oh, yay! You updated! It's been forever, I had to re-read the story but I think I just fell in love all over again. Please don't take to long to update next?! I love this so much and the curiosity eats me away. I love it! Update soon, please!

I'm so happy that your writing again :) well done chapter. I enjoyed Elle's interlude about having to much time in summer to over think things. I can relate! Lol I'm not sure about Hayden and his intentions. I hope he's not messing around. Looking forward to the next chapter! 3

OMO MY FEELS. I'm a sucker for stuff like this. Thanks for gracing me with your story! XD

Where's the continuation? This is highly amusing and funny :)) I enjoyed reading!

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I'm loving Grandma... he sounds dreamy :D but I agree with her, what's wrong with him?

Can't wait for more!

Please tell me there is more?

OH MY LORD. I've said "great story" alot or "I LOVED THIS" but not once have i said i'm going to die if you never update this again. Every chapter i read i wanted more. oh my gosh i'm honestly devoted to the story. Just. Amazing. I really can't get over how awesome this is. Seriously. !

I... skimmed through this entire story again from Chapter 1, and noticed that you added some background and origin on the story.

But if the girl's just 21 and she's starting college...that means she took a four year break after high school? Could I get a bit more detail on that? ... or maybe 21's just a typo.

Or if that's private business...

:x Don't mind me.

I really enjoy this new story of yours and it definitely leaves me wanting more. Tell your friend that I hope everything works out for the best. I have been through something similar and I wish something like that would happen to me. It's nice to know that good things happen to good people. It makes me believe in the choices that I make even more. I can't wait for the next chapter.

P.S. I am gonna buy Jonnie the Girl as soon as I get my new debit card. I miss reading it.

I love this story! I have always dreamed of a guy like Hayden and I see some of myself in Elle. Please update soon!

Omg brilliant story! You make her sounds like a beautiful young woman who is very afraid of herself and him sounds like the type of brilliant hunk of a man who has just that perfect personality that any girl would love.

it's short, but it feels like that's the right place to end, so, no matter! hmm... i think when i first found this story, i commented that she should be more averse to the opposite sex because of what happened to her? anw, just want to let u know that ur doing a great job. she wants a man's touch, yet she's afraid. very realistic.

love ur writing.

1st off - killing someone with a fork is the best line. EVER.

2nd off - awesome grandma.

Can't wait for your next update!