Lol. The irony! XD

Keep updating! :)

I'm totally interested! Can't wait for more!

I like it! I think this story has potential and I can't wait to read more! :D Happy writings!

This first chapter has me wanting to read more. I'm already liking both the characters and want to know if he's for real, and if Ellie is going to get swept off her feet. Looking forward to the next chapter!

oh, please continue! this has great potential :) i look forward to reading more :) but just one comment since they are 21 could you make them a little bit more mature? i mean hes some kind of star/model and she seems to be dealing with a lot at her age. i think a little more maturity would suit their characters better... :) just a thought! cant wait for more!

OMG!This is so awzome!haha! SOON!

This boy is such a cutie. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapter :)

I was a little uncomfortable with the first bit, I mean, I'm fresh out of an upper class all-girls school, and so I always feel uncomfortable with these situations. Thank you, sheltered life. But also (and I'm making assumptions here) I find it kind of weird when authors write about those serious serious situations like abuse and suicide when sometimes it's glaringly obvious that it's all a bit fabricated (and for good reason)

Not saying yours is terrible, it was a sort of briefish skim over everything, but that's why I nearly stopped reading halfway down haha

That said, I wouldn't mind having a Hayden for myself. Not at all.

I like it, it sounds very promising! I like to see how this story will develope, so please keep updating it.

"Hooray!" .. That was my first response when I finished reading this chapter and it also sums up what I felt when I saw the email alert arrive with the notification of your new story.

It's been a while since I've read anything from you, so I cannot fairly comment on progress and I won't. I also do not think it is fair to criticize anything at this stage until I know for sure where you are taking the story.

So here are my thoughts when reading this chapter:

Your writing is refreshing to read - engaging and at a good pace leaving me wondering what will happen next.

The inclusion of stereotypes and meeting of expectations while consciously showing the reader it is so, makes me think there will be some subversion of these later on.. Well, I expect there to be.

Hm, so far many possibilities are open, that's all I can say! (Or am I thinking too much?)

For an introduction to arouse interest in the reader, I believe you have succeeded.

All the best,

-Meryle