Reviews for Eternal Slumber
inactive account 1471 chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
This, obviously, wasn't a particularly long poem. Much shorter than the others, but I think that's what I liked about it. I mean, you said everything and got some metaphorical point across with plays of words and parallelisms and such, and it turned out really interesting.

TheresaRayne chapter 1 . 9/29/2010
Beautiful, and yay, you love the usage of bolded and italicized words as much as I do, it's better for emphasis, Am I Right? :D all in all, it was beautiful!