Reviews for Swimming in Rain
Guest chapter 24 . 5/8/2014
On my goodness! This is my favorite story. I loved every part of it. Its just so sweet. :)
sensitivegirl chapter 22 . 1/26/2014
your story is awesome. i loved it the moment i started reading the thing that i don't understand is that why most of authors are so prejudised against redheads and blonde females . Its rather disappointing. And i'm not either. other than that, good piece of work . Keep writing. You do a good job..:-)
xxSongBirdxx chapter 4 . 1/10/2014
dude he soo not good doe
Guest chapter 2 . 8/29/2013
This chapter, at least the party bit, positively REEKS of Pride and Prejudice it's insane. The 'do you dance Aiden?' and the reply in the negative? I don't know if I'm just an English Lit enthusiast imagining parallels here or what but I'm liking this story so far
artistic dreamer chapter 10 . 8/16/2013
this has a pride and prejudice feel to it. hahah i like it!
macy8 chapter 1 . 8/6/2013
this is good
TK Johnson chapter 5 . 7/19/2013
This is good so far but this chapter disturbs me slightly. I understand a nod toward Pride & Prejudice but this is too similar...this whole chapter borders on Plagiarism. Also I understand that they're British but this is set in the 2000s. I have yet to meet a modern day 20 something Brit that speaks the way that they did in this chapter. This story could be lovely, but I encourage you to let your characters have their own mistakes, adventures, and obstructions. We as readers can understand the nod to dear old Jane with out being beat over the head with it.
sofia.maria chapter 2 . 2/17/2013
I think you should put this story as an AU fanfiction.
A-new-colour chapter 8 . 2/5/2013
Oh. I see now. It's a modern day version of pride and prejudice!
That is so cool!

You're really great :D
A-new-colour chapter 5 . 2/4/2013
okayyy... pride and prejudice references
here they are
ronnie: elizabeth
aiden: mr. darcy
kiera: jane
stephen: Mr. bingley
farrah: ms. bingley
george (I'm guessing) : mr wickham

and aiden's line when the girls were walking around the room were nearly the same as darcy's!
its good but im more or less predicting the incidents before the happen
A-new-colour chapter 4 . 2/4/2013
woah... a lot of pride and prejudice similarities here
whatever.. this is good :)
Megan chapter 16 . 11/11/2012
Hey I really like this story - it reminds me of a similar plot to Austen's Pride and Prejudice... just a thought.
heal me forever chapter 23 . 8/27/2012 FUCK...dis is like BANG ON ,...great job i love it 3
TO-OLazyToLogin chapter 14 . 8/27/2012
So, how do you pronounce Aiden's surname?
Is it Mc- Fad- Yen (like how its spelt)?
Or is it meant ro rhyme with Aiden? So Mc- Fay- Den?
Ms.Jennylautner chapter 22 . 8/7/2012
Wow ! This was amazing :D you're very very talented !
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