|Reviews for one last moment|
| Rhocar chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
Once again I am moved by your writing, part of me thinks dont keep reading it too emotional, but the other half says, it is too good not to read.
I like you don't aspire to be a writer, I enjoy writing stuff when the time feels right, don't care about all the rules that are supposed to go with literacy. Just want to do it my way.
| HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
It's scary how much I could relate to this. It's very well written and presented, and again I like your decision to use all lowercase. It gives the writing a depressed feeling, which is exactly what you want when writing on this subject.
The last line is especially powerful, though looking at from an unbiased perspective, I don't think that anyone who can't personally relate to what you're talking about would find it that way.
"never though a kiss" - Should be 'thought'.
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