Reviews for Kinda, Sorta, Maybe a Fairy Tale
Shailaputri chapter 1 . 5/20/2018
I think she should tell him how she felt about him years ago. Else it will like she likes him only for his looks.
xoa chapter 1 . 8/5/2015
Yay! I loved it-I'm a huuuuge sucker for cliches :)
twiinklex chapter 1 . 8/16/2013
Fluffy, adorable, sweet, endearing and everything I love to read about despite being somewhat predictable. (But aren't cliches always the best?)
xEchoxInfernox chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
lol thats hilarious, and oh so awkward. seths a sweetheart, i just wanna pinch his cheekies, weird, i know P. anyway i love this one-shotD
HarderToBreathe chapter 1 . 5/15/2012
HAHAHAHA! That was amazing! :D Chunky 3 Shorty. :] Keep on writing!
nnn chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
It's an extremely sweet and beautiful story, I enjoyed reading it.
Alltoowell chapter 1 . 3/18/2012
Oh my gosh! That was SO adorable! BAHAH.I can't stop laughing at her personality.

"You know that problem I had in elementary and middle school?"

"Farting whenever a teacher called on you?"

Gosh, that conversation got me laughing so hard. This oneshot is brilliant. I absolutely love it!
DorkExpress chapter 1 . 9/27/2011
How cute!

MADdreamers chapter 1 . 6/4/2011
This has got to be one of the cutest stories I've read. Great job and thanks for sharing it.
natmarie chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
I really really like this one. I've seen this cliche done before but usually it comes out sounding materialistic and vane. This has the connection and friendship as a base. Your dialogue is smart and funny. I think if you wanted to, you could expand on this, so it isn't quite so rushed at the end. Though I love that they got together. Seth...swoon. That way you can add some details, some more back story and build up the characters. It could be a longer one shot or even a multichaptered story if you wanted too. There is a lot of potential. Of course you can leave it as is, I'll love it any way.
thefaultinourpatronus chapter 1 . 2/5/2011
This is way cute D I love the the nickname 'Chunks'! It's random and funny. Actually this whole thing is random and funny and awesome :) Hayden and her "problem" are hilarious too XD I love the whole best friend cliche. Great job! :)

x mandy

~review marathon, link on my profile~
Fantom Phreeke chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
This was incredibly halarious. I loved the examples you gave. It was so Meg Cabot. I could tell as soon as you wrote that Chunky was transferring to her school that he would be hot.

But I didn't really like how they ended up together. I imagine that Chunky would have been more insulted that Hayden suddenly wanted to be with him now that he was hot. I think that unless you include that fact that she had wanted to kiss him since she rejected him earlier in the story, it makes her seem much more superficial than you meant her to be. But I feel like there should have been another day to the story. Like, it wasn't until after he moved to his dorm that they ended up together.

I really do like the story, though. It was great! Lots of laughs!

R. Tist chapter 1 . 12/17/2010
The uncomfortable moments of shame were my favorite parts. :)) Overall, a story that I just can’t help but love.
KeeKee chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
A million 'aw's to this story. The ending was just too adorable for words and I like that you've introduced the main character's major flaw in such a way that it kind of becomes endearing by the end of the story. Kudos to your writing
schradez007 chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
Oh my gosh. That was so freaking cute I'm seeing sunshine and rainbows spontaneously erupt on my monitor. Well done!
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