I think she should tell him how she felt about him years ago. Else it will like she likes him only for his looks.

Yay! I loved it-I'm a huuuuge sucker for cliches :)

Fluffy, adorable, sweet, endearing and everything I love to read about despite being somewhat predictable. (But aren't cliches always the best?)

lol thats hilarious, and oh so awkward. seths a sweetheart, i just wanna pinch his cheekies, weird, i know P. anyway i love this one-shotD

HAHAHAHA! That was amazing! :D Chunky 3 Shorty. :] Keep on writing!

It's an extremely sweet and beautiful story, I enjoyed reading it.

Oh my gosh! That was SO adorable! BAHAH.I can't stop laughing at her personality.

"You know that problem I had in elementary and middle school?"

"Farting whenever a teacher called on you?"

Gosh, that conversation got me laughing so hard. This oneshot is brilliant. I absolutely love it!

How cute!

XOXO

This has got to be one of the cutest stories I've read. Great job and thanks for sharing it.

I really really like this one. I've seen this cliche done before but usually it comes out sounding materialistic and vane. This has the connection and friendship as a base. Your dialogue is smart and funny. I think if you wanted to, you could expand on this, so it isn't quite so rushed at the end. Though I love that they got together. Seth...swoon. That way you can add some details, some more back story and build up the characters. It could be a longer one shot or even a multichaptered story if you wanted too. There is a lot of potential. Of course you can leave it as is, I'll love it any way.

This is way cute D I love the the nickname 'Chunks'! It's random and funny. Actually this whole thing is random and funny and awesome :) Hayden and her "problem" are hilarious too XD I love the whole best friend cliche. Great job! :)

x mandy

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This was incredibly halarious. I loved the examples you gave. It was so Meg Cabot. I could tell as soon as you wrote that Chunky was transferring to her school that he would be hot.

But I didn't really like how they ended up together. I imagine that Chunky would have been more insulted that Hayden suddenly wanted to be with him now that he was hot. I think that unless you include that fact that she had wanted to kiss him since she rejected him earlier in the story, it makes her seem much more superficial than you meant her to be. But I feel like there should have been another day to the story. Like, it wasn't until after he moved to his dorm that they ended up together.

I really do like the story, though. It was great! Lots of laughs!

-Bambi

The uncomfortable moments of shame were my favorite parts. :)) Overall, a story that I just can’t help but love.

A million 'aw's to this story. The ending was just too adorable for words and I like that you've introduced the main character's major flaw in such a way that it kind of becomes endearing by the end of the story. Kudos to your writing

Oh my gosh. That was so freaking cute I'm seeing sunshine and rainbows spontaneously erupt on my monitor. Well done!