Reviews for The Road to Happiness
Terryn Fawkes chapter 5 . 1/17/2011
pretty good. sad story my only real advice pertains to the second paragraph in chapter 1. there was to much I I I, you could have put it better by using descriptive phrases rather than listing exactly how things appared that would evoke more emotion heres an exampl: My battered reflection stared back at me from the bathroom mirror. bu t other than that altogether pretty good i liked it. IDK im new on here i should have some shiznit up in a day or 2 when they let me upload my stories. peace love and chickens, Terryn Fawkes
liverwurstrocks27 chapter 2 . 10/1/2010
Pretty good story. I like how you write. It is very descriptive. Update soon!