Reviews for Gunpoint Romance
ImmanenceEnsured chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
This is wonderful and brilliant:) You so smartly describe this feeling of being trapped, and a person making you unhappy, because otherwise they themselves become unhappy, not realizing they already are. This was such a cool little oneshot.
the0z3452 chapter 1 . 7/31/2011
this was amazing. i got confused at the end on whether he shot himself or he shot his 'lover.' but it was beautifully written and i love how the ending is unsure.

this was insanely beautiful.
RandomReveiwer chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
wow. heavy.
TinaLouise chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
My first thought at reaching the end was "Woah". You did a great job with this one. It's powerful and moving while leaving the reader a bit unsure of what exactly happened.

This is going on my fav list and staying there.
Reese Weston chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
Powerful. This was my favorite bit: "A lifetime in their prison is infinitely better than a lifetime in his."

Loving the way you used repetition in this. Great job-short and to the point.
Archia chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
I was reading this and at no point did I expect what happened. I really like how you repeat 'he isn't nice' alot, especially at the end. There's some really good descriptiveness and I really enjoyed this. Well done. I want to say more about how good this is but I'm not really sure what to say.