|Reviews for Hold On|
| AmShe256 chapter 6 . 10/15/2010
I feel bad for poor Kayin. Wonder what the creeper will do? Loved what you got so far. I look forward to the next installment.
| AmShe256 chapter 5 . 10/15/2010
Okay is this kid stupid or something? Why would she ever agree to sleep in the same bed as her capter? I mean she found condoms in the bathroom and they live in the middle of the woods. Plus she's being held there against her will. Not the brightest crayon this one.
| AmShe256 chapter 4 . 10/15/2010
Well that explains the looking alike thing. I guess I was right too, Kaylin is in the same situation. Or at least I'm thinking thats the most plausible excuse for him living with that nutter.
| AmShe256 chapter 3 . 10/14/2010
That's really strange that he called her a bird and it's kind of her last name. Wondering in Kaylin's in the same boat as Sienna. How do you pronounce that anyway?
| AmShe256 chapter 2 . 10/14/2010
I have a story! Okay...My freshman year of college me and my stepdad got into a fight and I stormed out of the house. He had told me I couldn't take my keys so I decieded to walk. I got stopped in my neighborhood by the police doing patrol or something. I look really young so I guess they see a girl stomping down the street in tears and they get a little concerned. They asked me a buch of questions and when I finally convinced them I was 18 they let me go. I got stopped by a bunch of other people too though. Most just asked if I was okay or needed a ride and then drove on. Well it got dark and I still hadn't reached my friend katy's house which was in the next town over. A guy driving this rusty teal blue truck slowed down and asked me the usual question, did I need a ride and where was I going. I told him no of course just like I had everyone else and he drove off. Next thing I know this dude coming back from the other direction and starting to pull over. I've had some pretty frightening experienses but that one has to be somewhere at the top. I took off running as fast as I could down the road. I think I ran about a mile. When I turned around he was gone. That's just what this story just made me think about. Men can be flippin' CREEPY!
| AmShe256 chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
I think this is the first story of yours that I've read that's been about a girl. The begining has got me interested.