I feel bad for poor Kayin. Wonder what the creeper will do? Loved what you got so far. I look forward to the next installment.

Okay is this kid stupid or something? Why would she ever agree to sleep in the same bed as her capter? I mean she found condoms in the bathroom and they live in the middle of the woods. Plus she's being held there against her will. Not the brightest crayon this one.

Well that explains the looking alike thing. I guess I was right too, Kaylin is in the same situation. Or at least I'm thinking thats the most plausible excuse for him living with that nutter.

That's really strange that he called her a bird and it's kind of her last name. Wondering in Kaylin's in the same boat as Sienna. How do you pronounce that anyway?

I have a story! Okay...My freshman year of college me and my stepdad got into a fight and I stormed out of the house. He had told me I couldn't take my keys so I decieded to walk. I got stopped in my neighborhood by the police doing patrol or something. I look really young so I guess they see a girl stomping down the street in tears and they get a little concerned. They asked me a buch of questions and when I finally convinced them I was 18 they let me go. I got stopped by a bunch of other people too though. Most just asked if I was okay or needed a ride and then drove on. Well it got dark and I still hadn't reached my friend katy's house which was in the next town over. A guy driving this rusty teal blue truck slowed down and asked me the usual question, did I need a ride and where was I going. I told him no of course just like I had everyone else and he drove off. Next thing I know this dude coming back from the other direction and starting to pull over. I've had some pretty frightening experienses but that one has to be somewhere at the top. I took off running as fast as I could down the road. I think I ran about a mile. When I turned around he was gone. That's just what this story just made me think about. Men can be flippin' CREEPY!

I think this is the first story of yours that I've read that's been about a girl. The begining has got me interested.