|Reviews for The Quest|
| FresianRoses chapter 4 . 5/15/2012
Awesome story. Are you still updating? 'Cause this is great.
Love the characters (except the Master dude and his soldier creatures)
Seriously hoping for more!
| suneye1999 chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
I don't know what to say. It's just too good! I knew you were a fantastic video editer, but an amazing writer too? Can't wait to read the rest, it already sounds interesting. And it's not always I feel that way the first chapter!
| Dragon-Rider II chapter 4 . 4/2/2011
But before I get onto the actual review, I thought I might warn you- NEVER, EVER, under any circumstances WHATSOEVER, should you mix coriander and eggs.
GRIFFONS! If there's more, I'll hand over a few e-brownies. (Because everyone loves e-brownies.)
And Yazzie's in the Land Of Griffins! (Whoops, I forgot what it was called...)
... Why do I always call her Yazzie? I dunno why... I just know a person... we call her Yazzie. The name sorta stuck for anyone with the same name.
I think that explains it.
Anyway, what's a Scarscis mark? It sounds col. (I want one now... thanks. -_-)
Teehee. Cloud had a dagger?
Suspicious guy. Seriously, give him a few weeks and he'll be walking around screaming at... clouds.
His companions. *Shakes head.*
That's such a cool name! (Except it reminds me of rat catchers... MEH!)
The name's cool!
Cool skin/hair, too.
But I'd probably freak if I saw someone like that...
... OK, Galvan's better. Humour everything.
Yeah, Galvan's definitely better.
Pfft. Dots for eyes my a**. They're not dots, darnit!
Poor gargoyle. The poor thing probably walked out like a huge burn.
The Master-dude's cruel.
Seriously, who throws coals at people?
Poor Yazzie. I know how it feel to hope with all your mind and soul that something's not happening.
AWAITING THE NEXT UPDATE!
And I leave you with a question- What is your opinion on man-dresses? (Yes, I demand an answer.)
| bluelibellule13 chapter 4 . 4/1/2011
Really interesting story so far, I can't wait to find out what happens next :)
| yesiamhuman chapter 3 . 2/17/2011
I really like this idea and I can't wait to see what happens next.
| Dragon-Rider II chapter 3 . 2/17/2011
Actually, I don't think these are the right words here...
THIS STORY'S ALIVE!
Anyway, great chappie (like the rest) and uuh... BROWNIE POINTS for mentioning dragons! D
Hehe. Mr. Brendan sounds hilarious. Hehe...
Anyway, double brownie points for mentioning archery! And the woods! And... and... The Shadow things.
Pfft. Silly girl! Yazzie was hoping for the storm/clouds to come! Hehe... (Of course she didn't know that, but...)
Hehe. The Shadows couldn't find her!
But one thing that bugged me a little was the grammar. Especially the whole mixing up 'its' and 'it's' thing.
(Hint- 'It's' 'it is'. Put it in the sentence first and see if it fits. Works well for me.)
PS. Bob-The-Rocks' a nice person... mostly... She just hates slow updates, especially in awesome stories.
to our awesomeness and such, we will be making things such as poor butterflies important. We've already did it in one story... and we can do it here. Just watch us... (kidding, kidding... but the 'making butterflies important' thing's true.)
| Bob-The-Rock chapter 2 . 2/17/2011
wait a second, YOUVE ALREADY WRITTEN A WHOLE BUNCH OF MORE CHAPPIES?
update soon? pleease? pretty please?
*sniff* you havent updated in AGES! come ON woman! pleease?
im being nice and im close to tears, shouldnt that be enough? geez...
sorry. im actually a nice person. really, i am. even ask dragon-riderII, she'll tell ya...right?
OOH! VISIONS! YAY!
the poor cloud dude, why doesnt he just evaporate and fly away? or, or, OR he could rain and disappear. hehehe...
i really like this story... better than many others...and many things ive tried (and failed) to write...
so, review? you ARE? COOLIES!
| Bob-The-Rock chapter 1 . 2/16/2011
IM SORRY I DIDNT GET THE CHANCE TO REVIEW BEFORE THIS! REALLY, I AM!
i was gonna, but then i VERY CONVENIENTLY forgot.
ahem. BUT THIS STORY IS SO COOL!
better than anything I could do...
soo...i dont gots anything left to say...only that those visions are AWESOME.
with that, review-END!
| Dragon-Rider II chapter 2 . 10/18/2010
Ooh, a new chappie.
Interesting one, too. NEW VISIONS! Ahem.
So now I have more of an idea of what these people look like. Cool. Can't wait for the next chapter... this was an awesome way to make my day after a lecture-filled school one. (Seriously, every subject all the time. This usually doesn't happen)
Lucky Yasmin, can get to sleep that quickly. When I wake up, it's bad luck for me. So I end up running on around six hours every day. Even if it's meant to be around 8.5 hours... any more than six, I become a lazy bum for the rest of the day. Hence my panda eyes of insomnia. Which leads my bestie to call me Gaara's look-alike, Gaara's bestie, etc.
Ahem. Disregard previous comment. Irrelevant.
Awesome chapter. Poor Cloud. Being chased like that by the Dark Side.
(I'll see if i can try and get a few more people to read this... they might seem interested.)
| Dragon-Rider II chapter 1 . 10/17/2010
I loved this. seriously, it grabbed my attention, unlike a few things i read these days... shame...
BUT THERE'S MEANING TO THE FIRST CHAPTER! Stuff happen! Man, I wanna read the next chapter... wanna read, wanna read, wanna read...I know I'm over reacting, but I LOVE action, and I can tell this story's gonna have it!
I also saw the book trailer on Youtube and it looked damn good.
Cant wait for the next chappie.