Reviews for The Tug Towards You
InkWitch chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
i love poetry. some writers on FP doesn't really GET poetry: they think that gettin a bunch of words to rhyme and make sense together is poetry. it's not.

i love this poem, it's honest, straightforward, and very simple. no fancy words, but with such a straight-edge way of showing the meaning, that its admirable.

love! xD


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x-d3vilz3v3-x chapter 1 . 10/2/2010

Mystery ;)
soliloquist chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
"Every breath you take

And every move you make

Every bond you break, every step you take

I'll be watching you..."

Know the song?


Sorry. It just reminded me a bit :P

Okay, no grammar nazi stuff here. It is a cute poem. The concept as a whole is maybe a little cliched? Don't let that bother you though - the whole point is to take something everyone is familiar with and make it new.

Particularly fond of the line 'He was most definitely a challenge'.

I like your attitude :P

Hope you get to solve the puzzle...