Reviews for Remember When
MagellinaFluffQueen chapter 1 . 11/23/2010
This is my life personified. "We fall into the routine of our lives/We never gave up on our dreams,/but locked them away from everything" I love it.
MagellinaFluffQueen chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
Hehe, lol I was a prom queen? LMAO, thats rich! Thanks. Some of the ryming SUCKS and I'm aloud to say that because I'm related to you. But overall, its pretty good.
Penmaster51 chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
This was such a deep song! It seriously touched something inside my heart, hahaha. It flows smoothly and I love, if you pay attention close enough, that it's like reading a very fast-paced story. From being a little kid, to like a pre-teen and then a teenager (i think...? lol) and then an adult. It's just...yeah, a bit breathtaking XD Lots of people can relate to this lol

That's about all I can say because I'm exhausted lol but also, I loved the chorus the best. Hope to read more of your songs sometime soon!