That cliffhanger, though xD

Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?

The chapters aren't really that long and the author notes are extremely annoying but I like the story

Sooooo...you're gonna come back right?

It has been years and I am STILL waiting!

This is really good, except its been OVER A YEAR since your last update! So please write more this is fantastic! :D

Please update! Sooo amazing!

Good story are they planning on eating her? I can't wait for more chapters! :)

Hi! I know it's been two years since you've updated and I just started your story, so I don't have much to say,

BUT I just wanted to point out that calling an Asian person "Oriental" is actually really offensive. The word is used to describe things, not people. I think the correct term you're looking for is API, American Pacific Islander ("South Asian" denotes India and what Americans call the Middle East), or you could just specify what kind of Asian ethnicity he is. Thanks!

And I don't know about your later chapters, but breaking up your paragraphs makes it a lot easier for readers. A large block of text is slightly intimidating and sometimes leads to skipping altogether.

And now I'm off to read some more! :)

Holy shit! They're gonna eat her! UPDATE SOON!

No update for two years? u gave up

Predictable trouble. NO BLANKET.

With a name like cleopatria, she is big trouble.
Wrap her up in a blanket and take her home!

great story im sorry but guilty of not reviewing. but you finish this chapter with 'fear for Kieran Black', should that be 'fear of Kieran black'.

This is a great, great, story, but the one thing I ask of you, is to create a page break before your authors' note. Please! I beg you! It doesn't even have to be special 0.0 but for some reason (yes, I know i'm dumb) I always read your AN as part of the story, every darn time v.v just a friendly suggestion .