|Reviews for Cleo|
| rasetsuyukino chapter 25 . 12/23/2015
That cliffhanger, though xD
| Guest chapter 25 . 12/20/2014
Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?
| twibbit chapter 25 . 10/10/2013
The chapters aren't really that long and the author notes are extremely annoying but I like the story
| monsgors chapter 25 . 6/11/2013
Sooooo...you're gonna come back right?
| Btwn-the-lines chapter 25 . 2/25/2013
It has been years and I am STILL waiting!
| the trash lord chapter 25 . 2/9/2013
This is really good, except its been OVER A YEAR since your last update! So please write more this is fantastic! :D
| Shadowkiller176 chapter 25 . 2/2/2013
Please update! Sooo amazing!
| Kaylie chapter 25 . 1/15/2013
Good story are they planning on eating her? I can't wait for more chapters! :)
| Madame Jenn chapter 2 . 12/18/2012
Hi! I know it's been two years since you've updated and I just started your story, so I don't have much to say,
BUT I just wanted to point out that calling an Asian person "Oriental" is actually really offensive. The word is used to describe things, not people. I think the correct term you're looking for is API, American Pacific Islander ("South Asian" denotes India and what Americans call the Middle East), or you could just specify what kind of Asian ethnicity he is. Thanks!
And I don't know about your later chapters, but breaking up your paragraphs makes it a lot easier for readers. A large block of text is slightly intimidating and sometimes leads to skipping altogether.
And now I'm off to read some more! :)
| Erstel 908iu chapter 25 . 11/15/2012
Holy shit! They're gonna eat her! UPDATE SOON!
| Oldwolf chapter 25 . 11/6/2012
No update for two years? u gave up
| OLDWOLF chapter 4 . 11/6/2012
Predictable trouble. NO BLANKET.
| oldwolf chapter 1 . 11/6/2012
With a name like cleopatria, she is big trouble.
Wrap her up in a blanket and take her home!
| eire girl chapter 6 . 8/24/2012
great story im sorry but guilty of not reviewing. but you finish this chapter with 'fear for Kieran Black', should that be 'fear of Kieran black'.
| Blaith Nightshayde chapter 25 . 8/9/2012
This is a great, great, story, but the one thing I ask of you, is to create a page break before your authors' note. Please! I beg you! It doesn't even have to be special 0.0 but for some reason (yes, I know i'm dumb) I always read your AN as part of the story, every darn time v.v just a friendly suggestion .