How depressing, but it is something that a minority - or rather, major minority - kids go through... So depressing.

This is a very gripping piece. Death and Depression go hand in hand, best friends, and they like to work together.

You lost me at, "no calamitous diagnosis of some incurable maladay"...

I liked how you personified Depression and Death and I swear my heart beat faster when she started cutting. Sounded very painful and I like the vocab you're using here. Good work here.

Oh wow. I don't know why but I feel like I've heard this story before. Not a story in words, but in my mind or something. Very creepy and addicting. I especially like the intro.

The nameless thing reminds me of what I thought was one of Roald Dahl's books, but I can't seem to figure out which book, so it might not be him. Anyways, the author never mentioned the main character's name, but it didn't affect the quality of the story.

I feel like I'm rambling, but I really like it!:D

I can imagine it took eons! xD Did you get to find all these words dictionary-surfing or what?

But I like them. Even though I don't really understand most of the words, I still got the general meaning of them, ha ha.

And even though she doesn't have a name doesn't she mean she isn't based off of someone. :)

Hearts, Chari!