Reviews for My Secret Admirer |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! This is so cute! I love how you made out James to be. He reminds me a lot of the guys at my school. Always joking around and being dumb. I think I know who the admirer is, but I'm not going to guess, because it might be someone else! Anyway, this is great and I loved it! Reminds me a bit of a story I wrote. Your writing skills are great too. You use punctuation where it's needed and everything. I'm really interested in reading more as well! Nice work! Miss Kito |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story love it. i can see some simalarities with 'my high school life.' love the story ] |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was way too short lol but i really loved it it's good you got the beta reader thing... (though i'm reading this a while after it was published) :D overall, good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw its over :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think you should either do an epilogue or a sequel where they meet in the future and are together. or something bad happens and they have to get back together again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw :3 Cuteness! Loved it 8D |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey! Great story! I like how you ended it, it was a very nice way. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute little story. I liked it all along when he just gave her clues about who he could be. It's kind of cliché that the guy you hate the most ends up loving you. And I love cliché stories :P All in all I had a good time reading this story. Great job. |
![]() ![]() great great great |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it did u hav it on bookmato cuz I've been waiting for ages I had no idea it was on here I love it good job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well I *finally* got around to reading this chapter! :D Oh my gosh, it was awesome! Really cute :3 Looking forward to the epilogue! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() rlli cute they make an adorable couple!:D |
![]() ![]() O-L-S here. Sorry dont want to log into my acct. This was a pretty good chapter, and pretty short. There was a few mistakes too, so I would fix those. But other then that is was good. O-L-S |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, it was great! I can't wait for the epilogue. And it doesn't really matter that it was short, I think it was good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it. I love how its james. its like they are meant for each other. where is the story going to go after this? |