|Reviews for 13:1|
| dragonflydreamer chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Wow, very interesting. I like how you keep everything vague-I assumed it was some kind of bank holdup, but I'm still not entirely sure. It lets the reader focus much more on the emotions of the piece.
The ending actually did take me by surprise. I was expecting the person to shoot, then regret it, but I guess that might have been a bit longer.
The last line was great. "He was my friend." So much emotion and meaning behind that.
I would like to see this expanded into a full story, but it's still very effective at this length. Nice piece!
| ZyggyGirl chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
Wow. This was really powerful, even though I didn't know what was going on. You portrayed the dilemma of 'kill or be killed' very well.