|Reviews for Sister Wolf|
| AshWolf Forever chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
Interesting idea. Well written. Good job
| Very nice chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
Short, but very good. Could make an excellent prologue to a longer story!
| RoseyLemonDrops chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
I really like this, it's a lovely insight into a wolf. Just a couple of things I thought though was that the concept of hearing a sound and realising it is coming from you is a little overdone, but that's just my opinion. And also in the next to last paragraph:
'if the forest did not welcome their presence any longer and neither would I.'
I think the 'and' should be a then.
Other than that I really enjoyed it. I'm writing a piece that has a bit to do with wolves and so your piece really caught my eye. As I said, I think it's really nice.