|Reviews for Fairy Godfather|
| Vampire Kitsune chapter 1 . 10/11/2010
Ah, I really enjoyed this story. Wonderful idea of a twist on fairytale settings.
I like how you introduce the relation between Chalon and Royla as a duty of a godparent, and Stark bucking of Royla. Oh, and the gay prince. Go, him!
I suggest adding a little more description of the backgrounds.
Did Royla ever learn etiquette?
And I probably should mention, I took this quote in entirely the wrong way...
"And she'll never give up her fresh supply of virgin's blood."
"Ah, well, I may be able to help with that."
Nice ending, I like the exploded chimmney Royla was supposed to fix.
| soliloquist chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
I really love fairy tales :)
This one was great - a bit of a twist, well written, and plenty of humour. Maybe not quite PG with some of the descriptions :P
I usually spell check for stories I like, but I didn't notice any mistakes in this one, and I don't even have any suggestions for improvements (except maybe to turn it into a novel...)
Great job :)
| Finwe chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
Hahaha! Quite the enjoyable read, and very well written. Thanks for sharing! I'm curious to see if these two have any further adventures. :D