Reviews for Raw
KrakedPorcelain chapter 1 . 1/6/2011
I love this. Well written, and even without the emphasis on certain words it easy to hear a voice behind the words rising in subtle anger, angst, and pleading. I have been through similar. Sucks, but you made it into something beautiful. Words I mean. The feeling is... well not quite the one you hope to endure too long I know.
YoursInDemigodishness chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
I can pretty much relate to this. I loved how you projected it with the crutch. Great job! ;)
Neonjuju chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
Perfect words for something I'm dealing with right now in my life. Major props for this.
CreativeGal125 chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
This story was really good I loved it! Did you write that from personal experience? It was somewhat sad...but it was really good! I remember you liked one of my stories...don't worry I will write one soon I've just been very busy...but great story! :)
lymli chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
that's heartfelt, and sweet.