Reviews for The beast
Tootapanga1 chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
hey i loved this, its truly amazing. you really captured the feelings that we can have on some days. well done.
FATEpending chapter 1 . 10/5/2010
I really like this. The last two lines are.. awesome. The only constructive criticism I would have is to not include too many adjectives.. I'm guilty of this myself. The line that stuck out to me as having too many adjectives though, was "Red eyes, dark silky hair, made to make any one jump in fright." Just the word silky was a little off. Great job though! Especially if this is your first poem.. wow.