Reviews for Suicide Hot Line
leavemeialone chapter 27 . 5/25/2013
This is seriously so cute! I am so happy for the two. I love how snarky she is. I like how he is. I think it is funny how they had met. Even though she wasn't suicidal, I think you just need someone to talk to in life. I am glad she had Mike to do it with. I am also super glad that they met each other and integrated into each other's life. I didn't want it to be just built on the phone, even though that was how it all started. I think seeing one another, learning each other's family members and friends makes it more real. I JUST REALLY LIKE THIS STORY! I thought it was so cute, I am disappointed that they finally admit their "likes" for each other at the very end of the chapter. I would have liked for it to prolong a little more. Overall, this is such a great story! Thank you for writing this!
Shayna-18 chapter 27 . 10/30/2012
Wow! I truly enjoyed this quite a lot!
I love their characters and their little quirks and how each of them interact with eachother!
The story line for this was very unique to me, and i like reading stuff where the 2 people have a friendship that turns into something more without it being overdone and mushy. I like how you made it sorta subtle but the other characters noticed it and ya i really enjoyed it!
I liked the ending, sad it was so abrupt but it seemed to suit it i guess.

- Shay
Electrick-Child chapter 24 . 9/1/2012
Love your story!3
YAY I FINISHED IT chapter 27 . 2/25/2012
FINSHED IT! LOVE IT! C YA!
breatheyou7 chapter 27 . 7/30/2011
I have to say I really enjoyed reading this story.

The plot is quite simple, it doesn't have much drama and I found it to be a nice rarity, it didn't ever really get boring though.

However, now this is just my suggestions - i'm not saying you write bad or anything, because you don't, I actually liked your writing.

But I think, perhaps the story could be more vivid if you described more things, such as scents and feelings and yeah. I also never really got the feeling they were thoroughly attractive to each other. You know, they never really touch and stuff.

Also, the grammar isn't perfect... however, I didn't get too bothered by it.

Honestly though, I loved the story and you did a great job. It was definitely worth a read, and the plot/idea is intriguing and original! I also came to like the characters very well!
MakingMyHeartBeatAgain chapter 26 . 6/12/2011
Oops, forgot to mention that this will indeed be going on my favorites list! (:
MakingMyHeartBeatAgain chapter 27 . 6/12/2011
I have no words other than kind ones to give you, truly!

This was amazing, beautifully written.

I loved how you had the age difference, it gave the story more depth versus had you made Mike 19 or 20. You wrote it very well and I think you captured Mike's side of the story very well.

Loved it!

-Mina
Lady of romance world88 chapter 27 . 5/19/2011
Hi. It's beautiful chapter and I like it. :) I just wish that this story should have epilogue or few chapters more to see if Mike and Lauren still have feelings for each other when she got back from England. :) Aww Angel born few kittens. Thats so cute. :) OMG Mike and Bryan end up got drunk then went into bed. Poor Mike and Bryan. :( Aww Lauren admit that she admit that she like Mike more than friends. How cute. :) Aww Lauren and Mike kiss each other twice in this chapter. How cute. :) I am glad that Lauren want to have cat and dog as her pets one day. Yay! :D I am glad that Mike admit that he likes Lauren more than friends. How cute. :D It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I like it. And keep writing. Don't stop writing. :) I am wonder if there will be sequel to this story or not? *curiously*
White Alchemist chapter 27 . 5/19/2011
It was so unexpected for her to say, "I like you" and then she says, "You're deaf, i knew it." :)) Funny. I like that.
DatSalt chapter 27 . 5/16/2011
Hehe, that was a great way to end this story :D

I really, really liked it! Great job!
Lady Quixote chapter 27 . 5/16/2011
That was so cute, I loved it!
Jevanminx chapter 27 . 5/12/2011
Love it!

JM
Raaawr Ima Dinosaur chapter 27 . 5/8/2011
Aww this was great! Although, I am sad that it's ended :'(

I wish you'd write a sequal :(

but anyway, this was such an amazing story and I enjoyed every bit of it.

Fantastic job! :D
t.med chapter 27 . 5/7/2011
I like it! good story, and love the way it's written.

thanks ;)
Ally chapter 27 . 5/7/2011
oh god! I'm begging you! epilogue please!
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