|Reviews for Silent Attraction|
| Spring Storm chapter 1 . 7/5/2012
Haha, "signed her" - I get it. Very clever.
| Raebie chapter 1 . 12/10/2010
| 3M2R chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
I don't really know much about haiku, so I usually read it as a poem.
I felt that this haiku is REALLY sweet.
'until he signed her'. The contrast in here was beautiful. Most of all, what you had used to symbolize the 'desire' was really unexpected.
AND I simply LOVED the pun!
Really living up to your screen name :D
| sophiesix chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
ooh lovely. very smooth. The 'her' rather than 'it' threw me for a sec, but then it kinda fit with a pillowbook sort of feel. very satisfying.
| Silverbelle chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
Definitely clever! It's has abstractness and yet makes perfect sense. Amazing how you did that.
| wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
Haha, a triple pun, nice one!
| Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
Very clever indeed. Keep it Up!
| nickyO chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
The sad truth is it took me way too long to get this one. (Not your fault, I'm sometimes on the slow side) But once I did, hat's off, witty and cute. :)
| Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 10/9/2010
feels a little suggestive :P
i liked it, random and all
| William G. Thorne chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
very interesting way of defining "silent attraction". I enjoyed this.
| tiger002 chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Nice way with the words. It shows you don't need a lot to get the point across.
| Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Wow, this is really clever! I'm impressed. Well done and keep writing.
| J.A. Fletcher chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Terrific, Punslinger, as usual.