Reviews for Between Us and Star 67
Renana chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
Wow I really adore your choice of words because you have a way with putting them together. The only thing I suggest is to think about rhythm because I found myself pausing often and going back to reread the sentence. Anyway, my favourite line is

"...forever revolving clockwork jet lag on best intentions."

Very pretty. I also like how it holds meaning. Awesome stuff :D

Renana