Reviews for Bedre End Engle
nat13kitty chapter 5 . 10/11/2010
Beautifuly written, though a tad confusing in parts. please continue!
Kamaete chapter 5 . 10/10/2010

Wow... okay, I so lied. It ended up being family night. On with the review:

So, I totally don't get where this is going (yet) but I'm ignoring that in favor of your epic writing and delicious characters. I think the first chapter, and these last two were actually pretty informative and fore-shadow-y. And then, the middle two were nice and steamy. (Though I have to wonder at the pass-out after-effects...)

I'm way hyped up and LOVE reading your writing style. It's almost like a chameleon, turning to different shapes but retaining its flavor (don't ask me how that is a chameleon, since they change colors.)

Besides that, your characters (and their pretty interactions!) are really facsinating!

Please continue,

slack-jawed cheese hugger chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
Man, why don't these things ever turn out how they're supposed to?

That last line there? That was the first thing I ever came up with. That's where I started with this story. It was AWESOME.

...and now it's not.

Son of a chicken.
slack-jawed cheese hugger chapter 3 . 10/8/2010
This damn chapter was SO HARD TO TIE IN YOU HAVE NO IDEA

slack-jawed cheese hugger chapter 4 . 10/8/2010


Kamaete chapter 2 . 10/7/2010


WOW. Your writing it astounds me and... I'm so in love... and... and...and... *cries with the beauty of it all*

Really, your writing... I've fallen in love! (I'm a fickle lover by nature though... er, kinda). It's so... I don't know but it leads my mind around on fantastical circles of delight and ardour... And this is only your nature of writing. I haven't even mentioned your characters!

There isn't much of them right now, and it may take a bit longer but you show exactly how much actions actually influence readers' thoughts of a character. This is already a rich tapestry of swirling colors and rich burgandy threads of characters.

Mikhail, Skarse, Sergei... Yuri (I don't know how I feel about him) they're all amazing!

I really can't wait for more of this, it's just fantastic!

Please continue your amazingness!

slack-jawed cheese hugger chapter 2 . 10/7/2010


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