Reviews for Jealousy |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story! It was unique and I liked the new Brandon. And I just have to say I go to Texas A&M so Gig 'Em Aggies! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! I've only read the fist chapter, but I gotta say; I love it! Who'd a thunk he was her b-friend? I love the last scentence and I can't wait to read the rest of it. Good job! /Dibban |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was so so SO good. Really, I couldn't stop reading! I would have liked some kind of conversation between Scott and Jennifer to...I don't know give things more closure between them. And the preview. Envy is going to be awesome! I'M SURE OF IT :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() i can't wait. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, it looks brilliant; I can't wait to get a good glimpse inside of Brandon's head :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I guess this is Jealousy in Brandon's POV? :P ~Ronnie~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() your writing it in his point of view thats awesome! i cant wait for the story! i like his point of view! his still kinda a jerk for tripping her i will most definitely be reading this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww cute and predictable. :) Sad to see it end so soon... Nice story overall. ~Ronnie~ stupid compulsory credit for French has gotten her a whole workload of ... work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() omygosh i havent read this in a while! this story is awesome how can i forget! well i read what i missed and im happy to say this is an awesome beautiful awe-worthy, shocking brilliant story. i just love it. brandon is so cute and sweet and nice see i knew he was always nice from the begining he just had an issue. scott got her sister jaden which i have to say is a really adorable couple. im so glad brandon and jennifer stayed together til the end! i want a brandon clone! for me and just for me! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahaha I KNEW IT! Scott would end up with Jennifer's sis...MWUAHAHAHA! And ouch, feeling sorry for Brandon there. And does this mean Jennifer's no virgin anymore? Was she even a virgin to start with? :O xD Update soon! ~Ronnie~ who's gotta take a shower (translation: her thinking place for heartfelt decisions) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love your story and characters. However, you might want to reread your latest chapter. There were a lot of awkward sentences that were okay, but were missing a certian flow that was present in your other chapters. |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting, but i don't know who's going to end up with who. i like this story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I squealed to no end when Brandon walked out of Scotts car. Awh man you shudda seen me, I was going OMFG OMFG D: OMFG! :) This story surprises me to no end :') You have an amazing story going :) keep it up :) x |