Reviews for Rough Waters
AJS chapter 1 . 4/23/2011
Read and loved this story. I think the plot was good but maybe Eli's animosity initially towards Sunny could have been better grounded. That would be my only criticism, otherwise this story played out wonderfully. Your writing has definitely improved and grown so much since you first started posting on FP, not that those stories weren't great as well, but you can definitely see the development.

Anyway. Don't really have much to say other than that I love this story. :) And I like how not everyone got a happy ending. Burle still puzzles me sometimes though...

- Alyssa
Camilla chapter 13 . 2/11/2011
I hate that he always has to leave... The chapters in wich their apart are so boring!
i loost speeling beas chapter 3 . 2/2/2011
i think we need to be secret best friends because a) i. love. the. blackhawks. and b) i. adore. deadlies catch. and c) i love this story thus far. ok bye
September Stone chapter 25 . 1/7/2011
I loved this story and am hopeful for a sequel! :) Thanks so much! Great work!
JennaLynne33 chapter 25 . 12/16/2010
Well lovely, I adore all your stuff. However, this was just amazing. Such a great read! I waited for updates- which unlike most authors- you are VERY prompt with. This reaffirmed my love for your stories. Which the rockstar ones were still posted! Can't wait for the sequel! xo
H.R. Hall chapter 25 . 12/12/2010
Hey there! This was excellent. I really enjoyed reading it late into the night the past few days. The plot was terrific, the characters realistic, and Sunny and Eli's romance a perfect mixture of hot and sweet. :)
shhsilence chapter 25 . 12/12/2010
So, I just kinda clicked on the story and was la la la reading along and then I saw that you wrote it and was like ohh, of course I like it...:) You are a wonderful writer. This was another good one!
Quiet Chaos chapter 25 . 12/11/2010
This was SUCH an amazing story. I love Eli so much, he's my new fictional crush. xD I really liked the mysterious plot, there aren't a lot of those on FictionPress, and Rough Waters was a really origional mystery. On the other hand, I think the ending with Richard was a bit rushed though. And also, we never found out what happened to Cliff-the police said that he was positive he was safe, but what really happened to him I have no idea. I loved Amanda in the story. I thought it was a really cute subplot how she was Jim's daughter. I didn't like how we never found out the "real" reason she came to town, because she said that it wasn't to reunite with her father. But other than that, I loved how she gradually became nicer in the story. All in all, Rough Waters was amazing. :)
Laura chapter 2 . 12/8/2010
Oh I love this so far. Basically I decided to read this because it's set in Alaska, but I think it's well written too. I'm going to start on ch 2 right now.

Alaska is beautiful! I was there this summer. I didn't make it out to the Bering Sea but what I saw was wonderful and I hope to go further west someday. However I highly recommend the Inside Passage, Juneau, Denali NP etc. Lovely.
mdassley chapter 25 . 12/7/2010
Loved this story! Although I kinda had Richard pegged pretty early on, but I didn't think he would go all psycho on Sunny! Yay for Eli beating the shit out of him! lol

Amazing story overall, I can't wait to read any upcoming stories you are willing to share with us!
Need the Happy Ending chapter 25 . 12/7/2010
Awesome story! Though I will say I knew what her news was right away... they never did seemed too concerned about protection.

I'm still voting for a "Shift" sequel. )
checkyesdana chapter 25 . 12/7/2010
This was so good! I spent the last few days reading it all! Romance with some mystery, i loved it
me.heart.fitzy chapter 25 . 12/7/2010
Oh my gosh! This was a beautiful story. It was so twistedly romantic with just enough mystery to keep it totally interesting!

I am so impressed. Thank you!
JESUSFREAK chapter 25 . 12/6/2010
vio923 chapter 25 . 12/6/2010
Loved the story. It was very different from the other stories that you've written - but good none the less. I liked how you developed the characters. It was nice to see how their relationship grew and changed.
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