Reviews for Make me believe
Jezzen chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
Hey, great work. :) Even though I would love to see more of this, maybe a pre-story about their childhood, it does work as a short story.

To make it a little more interesting though, you could stretch it out so the reader spends more time with the lives of both Johua and Cody. That way the reader can feel more of a connection to the characters, which would make the ending more meaningful.
pille-ip chapter 1 . 10/8/2010
Whoa... Quick, short, but really good.