Reviews for Shades: Life Untamed
lymli chapter 13 . 12/2/2010
the ending is so sad, people don't know how important is a thing until they lose them.
MagpieCat chapter 10 . 11/1/2010
nice.

it really conveys the feeling of hurting, but having hope.

i like how Plans was capitalized...
MagpieCat chapter 6 . 10/21/2010
all these feelings and thoughts you write make me feel all emotional.

outside looking in.
MagpieCat chapter 5 . 10/21/2010
terrible experiences.

many people (girls) have been through this.
MagpieCat chapter 4 . 10/21/2010
really special way you describe these feelings.

i have a problem with speaking in crowds, and i have to concentrate really hard to say what i want to say.

this really makes me hurt.
MagpieCat chapter 3 . 10/21/2010
i've thought about these things before, but it scares me.
MagpieCat chapter 2 . 10/21/2010
this is great.

i really like the way you describe feelings

and the last line was also a very special idea...
MagpieCat chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
your descriptions are wonderful.

great imagery.
Subbie chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
Me too... Can feel you here, and understand oh-so-well...
Bonjour Skitty chapter 4 . 10/9/2010
I stutter. A lot.

Or sometimes, a memory is triggered and I sit there, viewing it on repeat while the rest of the world passes on by.
Bonjour Skitty chapter 2 . 10/8/2010
First of all, thank you for your kind review.

Now, onto your review. To begin with, I can identify with this on such a painful level. In fact, the poem you reviewed earlier was about someone I know who suffers from bipolar. We both have it, actually, but he is a rapid cycler. I often feel as if a lot of people can't comprehend that it isn't a choice.

This is raw. Some of your descriptions match the mess inside of myself. Especially the remark about slitting wrists. But I love it. Don't stop writing this.