Reviews for Cobwebs
Der Adler Des Mondes chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Hmm, this poem reminds me of your other poem "Debris" I think it is called.

Being left alone is quite sad but left alone while the party is going on in front is cruel.

"Distant melodies misbegotten in pain,

struggle to stay sane fails to being.

Tears streaming, hics choking,

few would know, none will ask."

The lines I put up there describe the behavior of teens today

"Is it happening to me? No? Then I don't give a damm."

I can't say I am NOT guilty of it...but I can say I do it considerably less frequently way less than your average teenager.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
i like it.

and it makes me feel so alone.

i just see a girl sitting alone in a corner, and everyone else is just...doing their thing.

and...maybe she was feeling bad before, but maybe a little worse now, because she is completely invisible.