Reviews for I don't even |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far! The style is original. And I like the titles of the chapters! There were some typos in the last chapter though... Anyways, I'll be waiting for further chapters! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a really interesting story :) Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi, great story so far :D I like reading it, and i hope you update soon or when you can, no need to rush *Sweatdrop* |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting story . . . what does it mean that Noah's father "wants him home that night" i'm kind of afraid to find out . . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is pretty interesting for a piece of writing. I like it, it's quirky, though I did spot a couple of spelling/grammar/punctuation errors. It feels quite intense though, I got to the end of the chapter pretty much feeling like someone had been talking at me for an hour. But then, I really liked it, so maybe that's a good thing! Keep up the writing :) ~Roxie H. |