Reviews for To Get To You
muffinking chapter 2 . 10/6/2013
It started out okay, but I just can't find myself to carry on reading it as it went on. I didn't like the introduction of so many characters in such a short time and it confused me. I wish you could have taken it more slowly and divided the introductions into chapters. I didn't find the main character to be consistent in terms of personality, as well.
lindallama chapter 16 . 8/18/2013
I really hope you decide to at least finish this story, im sure there are heaps of people like me who would love to continue reading your stories! :)
renegade01 chapter 16 . 7/27/2013
Amazing story. I loved reading it and hope you continue with it someday :-)
KiwiSD chapter 16 . 7/20/2013
what other site are you going to be moving to? youre right FP isnt what it used to be I can never find anything good which is why I'm really sad you may not be finishing this on here because I feel like I finally found something good!
Critical chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
I really liked how you started the story, setting the stage with Danielle's childhood experience and how it shaped her outlook on love. But almost immediately after that, everything went downhill for me. Danielle started sounding a little obnoxious with her bragging about her talent but that's not a bad thing in a character, as long as you acknowledge that as a character trait. It seems to me that you tried to set her up as the exact opposite of the stereotyped 'popular girl' (that her sister is) and stumbled into the dark country of Mary Sue-dom. The scene where she flirted with the motorbike guy just seemed to emphasize that she is no different from her 'slut' sister, who displayed a considerable lack of sluttiness in this chapter when compared to Danielle. Not being a girly-girl doesn't mean that you aren't a bitch. While I can say that the sister and her friends display a decent amount of bitchiness Danielle isn't exactly a 'good girl' either. Flawed characters are good, but their flaws must be real and acknowledged :)
Guest chapter 16 . 7/17/2013
You should try Wattpad it's much better than fictionpress
Guest chapter 15 . 4/1/2013
I absolutely love this story! Please continue!)
HarderToBreathe chapter 15 . 6/18/2012
PLEASE UPDATE! the sexual tension between Reagan and Danielle is freaking insane! They feel the connection alright. I don't like Archer very much though. Pls pls update very soon! :)
Nikkole15 chapter 15 . 4/27/2012
I hope you continue this. I really like the idea of Danielle and Reagan. They just seem like the perfect match as far as chemistry and sexual tension(gasp! I DID just say that. BAM!) Not that it matters what Reagan does because he ends up cheating while he's with Danielle's sister anyway :) Reagan just seems like the type that has/will fall for Danielle :) I like that prospect! Sorry, I normally am lazy when it comes to reviewing. So I have been following the story for awhile, but I was just lurking. Lol.
Serenilsima chapter 7 . 4/26/2012
Love this story :) try to update soon this waiting is kiilliiiiiing meeeee ;)
HelloFasination chapter 15 . 4/18/2012
Hey I am in love with your story! You probable won't be updating because I think its an old story but just letting you know your an amazing writter xox
HelloFasination chapter 15 . 4/18/2012
Hey I am in love with your story! You probable won't be updating because I think its an old story but just letting you know your an amazing writter xox
Pissed off fam chapter 15 . 4/11/2012
To the reader below me, i dont know what your problem is...this iis a website for writers who just love to write for the heck of it... Theres a thing called constructive criticism amd your comment is so far from it. If you do not have anything good to say about a certain work you can say it nicely or just shut the f*** up!
Reader chapter 15 . 4/10/2012
just when I find this story interesting (not to mention different) this will be the last I will read of this...

This story is the same...the good girl turned bad by sleeping with all the guys..the poo guy who loved her and accepted sad and DISAPPOINTING.
BOONIK chapter 15 . 4/1/2012
update soon plzz, i love this story!
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