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![]() ![]() ![]() WHY!? WHY ARE YOU SO AMAZING? XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your writing is amazing. That was such an impressive image in my mind you made. Amazing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay - wow, this blew my mind! Brilliant writing, I loved reading this! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can see dark brick coffeehouses with rings of smoke curling up from the tables when I read this (especially in the second and third parts). Very impressive. |
![]() ![]() ![]() god this was breathtaking. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Stunning. Love your word choice. Don't know how I missed this one. Vivid imagery and the like as well. Awesomeness |
![]() ![]() ![]() the last line had this really big impact. "violent" and "beauty"-two words that added so much intensity to the whole piece. loved it. :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() i can't even begin to describe how excited i was to see that you had uploaded a new poem. and as usual, this is stunning, breathtaking, and wonderful. i love the way you divided the poem into 4 sections. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm pretty sure I could give you a list of ten words and you could throw them onto a piece of paper and it would still sound like a masterpiece. Seriously. Like with all of your work, I am in love with this! I'm not even able to soak in the big picture of it yet (I'm not positive I ever will) but it's still absolutely, purely, incredibly (and every other "ly" word that has positive connotations) amazing! Great to read something from you again :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lovely, lovely as usual. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Long time no see! I miss your writing a lot! I especially love the first line, "orphans of risk are paper dolls/soaked in gasoline" But haha, like your other poem, I still don't quite get what you're talking about (ie, I don't get the 'concrete' side of things), still, it's a lovely combination of words! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Perhaps if I contain this awe I feel after reading your work and sit quietly for a moment, I could recover just enough to actually say something intelligent. Maybe. You deserve that rewarding feedback. I admire your talent. "Beautiful insomniac" especially blew my mind. Briana |