Reviews for in glass jars
pastel.raindrops chapter 1 . 8/10/2014
Naver chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Your writing is amazing. That was such an impressive image in my mind you made. Amazing.
SmashedIce.X chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
Okay - wow, this blew my mind! Brilliant writing, I loved reading this! :)
Cirbra chapter 1 . 3/14/2011
I can see dark brick coffeehouses with rings of smoke curling up from the tables when I read this (especially in the second and third parts). Very impressive.
believe in her chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
god this was breathtaking.
natmarie chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
Stunning. Love your word choice. Don't know how I missed this one. Vivid imagery and the like as well. Awesomeness
imploding supernova chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
the last line had this really big impact. "violent" and "beauty"-two words that added so much intensity to the whole piece. loved it. :D
LunarGirl chapter 1 . 10/27/2010
i can't even begin to describe how excited i was to see that you had uploaded a new poem.

and as usual, this is stunning, breathtaking, and wonderful. i love the way you divided the poem into 4 sections.
Imminent Paradox chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
I'm pretty sure I could give you a list of ten words and you could throw them onto a piece of paper and it would still sound like a masterpiece. Seriously.

Like with all of your work, I am in love with this!

I'm not even able to soak in the big picture of it yet (I'm not positive I ever will) but it's still absolutely, purely, incredibly (and every other "ly" word that has positive connotations) amazing!

Great to read something from you again :)
Acaylee chapter 1 . 10/16/2010
Lovely, lovely as usual.
Narq chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
Long time no see!

I miss your writing a lot!

I especially love the first line, "orphans of risk are paper dolls/soaked in gasoline"

But haha, like your other poem, I still don't quite get what you're talking about (ie, I don't get the 'concrete' side of things), still, it's a lovely combination of words!
schizosophia chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
Perhaps if I contain this awe I feel after reading your work and sit quietly for a moment, I could recover just enough to actually say something intelligent. Maybe.

You deserve that rewarding feedback.

I admire your talent. "Beautiful insomniac" especially blew my mind.