That was another well written chapter. The only error I spotted was at the beginning when you said "The way I saw it, there wasn't much I could do about the shifter's vision." I think the word "Irvine's" should go where "shifter's" is. Other than that it was well written. We get to learn more about the vampires, and Raelene and Talia seem to become closer. I look forward to reading the next chapter, keep up the great writing.

That was an interesting chapter. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. We see a vision of the possible future for Talia, so it will be interesting to see how that plays out. And Zander and Chase are continuing to but in on Talia's life and mess with her schedule. It was a good chapter, and I look forward to reading the next, keep up the great writing.

YES! LOVE IT! I was smiling, and squealing through the whole chapter! well written! Keep it up! )

really great story i love all the twist and turns And how i can not figure out what will happen next

Looking forward to the next chapters! :)

Well that was a great chapter. Again, I didn't encounter any spelling or grammar errors. It was great that Talia was able to tell Jas about her situation. And it was great that she got the second highest on her exam and passed the class. I look forward to reading what happens next, keep up the great writing.

That was a well written chapter. I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors, and it was a good chapter. It was nice of Talia to bring up that she wanted to tell Jas to Chase. I had a feeling that Raelene had failed her history exam when Talia saw/heard her crying. I look forward to reading what happens next, keep up the great writing.

I just read this entire story (well, all available chapters, obviously) in one sitting! I have to say I'm hooked, and eagerly awaiting your next update!

I totally love it! especially how you made is seem like she was going to end up with Will, but Chase was the one that she's with...for now! LOVE IT! keep it up! )

Well that was a well written chapter once again. I did run into one spelling error, you had "'I though since I'd survived the transformation...'" where "though" should be "thought". Other than that I didn't encounter any other spelling or grammar errors. Talia has a bit of a breakdown because she thinks she got set up, but things seem to work out. And her and Chase's relationship progresses further. And now she has a reason for being at the academy. Things seem to be picking up for her. I look forward to reading what happens next, keep up the great writing.

That was an intriguing chapter. It was well written, I didn't spot any spelling or grammar errors. Talia has begun her exams, and she and Will got to talk a bit more. It was interesting how she came off to Will and how he reacted. Very bold statements were made, but it seemed to work out well. Keep up the good writing, I look forward to reading what happens next.

Oh my god. I was reading this chapter during one very boring class. I swear I was girlishly grinning and squealed a few times, its a wonder how I wasn't caught. God, I love Chase

Okay, I'm slowly starting to like Chase. Slowly. *pointed glare*

I will only approve of Chase when he stops being such a controlling douchebag, or at least less of one. The jerk.

That was another well written chapter. I didn't encounter any spelling or grammar errors. Not much happened in this chapter, but in a good way (if that makes sense). It seems Talia is growing more fond of Chase. I wonder what will happen next, keep up the great writing.