Reviews for forward motion
slowxromance chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
This was lovely. The imagery was so clear and descriptive, and I could see it as I was reading. I loved the description of the clouds.

Great job :)

Punslinger chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
A vivid, nostalgic word picture that brings back many memories. Makes me want to get back on the road again.