Reviews for The Fairie Captivation |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story, thanks for the read. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the world building so far! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so cute! And quite creative! Loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I keep coming back to this to reread it and I love it everytime. It makes me smile and is just as captivating as it was the first time I read it. The supernatural creatures were so intriguing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story was cute and interesting! The only thing I wish was that it had been a tad bit longer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful plot and characters! I hope to read more of your work, especially of the slash fantasy variety. Any chance of a sequel for this? I hope so. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really did love it. The only thing is, I felt that Ezra's mind changed to quickly, and that he accepted Ardot to quickly. I adored the last chapter though! It was wonderful and I could really picture everything that was happening. I enjoyed the first chapter also. One thing I'm confused about is how Ardot saved Ezra's life, I know he fell from a cliff (Why did he go up there anyway?) but did Ardot catch him? I love it a lot! Bravo, The Purple Knight One Oh One :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have just found your story and it was delightful! I just wished it was longer. The story could have had more conflict and the chase made longer. |
![]() ![]() ![]() (I finally got myself an account!) I love this story! The ending was so sweet an relaxed, the characters come to life in such a bright way, and i love the brownies! they're characters were just so cute, especially how they like to play with his hair! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this. The world you created sounds cool. I liked Ezra a lot and the brownies, too. I also loved the imagery of Ardot and Ezra cuddling at the end. There are a couple of badly misspelled words, but other than that, this is a well-written story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome and hot! I wish, I too, had an incubus for a lover. |
![]() ![]() ![]() good story. good pacing and descriptions. thanks for sharing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() O_O...Wow! Just wow! THIS IS AMAZING! X |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wonderful! Short, sweet and smutty _ what more could one want. I really liked everything about this, fairy wizard, best type of wizard ever. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it. Short and sweet definitely did the trick here, and I just really enjoyed it from start to finish. It was well written. I love short stories with brownies, pixies, wizards, ect. There's not enough of them, so thank you for putting this up! |