Reviews for supernova
classic violet chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
beautiful imagery, gorgeous.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 10/24/2010
I liked the alliteration in the first stanza it worked well.

I also thought the ending was great. It's a beautiful description of how things didn't work out.

The other line I really liked was "with our pasts on our backs" it's a beautiful and unique way to describe how our pasts continue to affect us.

The only thing is going from detonate and then waiting to do the explode part seemed a little off me to.

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believe in her chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
the last two stanzas are definitely the strongest...a very good poem. i look forward to reading more! ]