|Reviews for 21|
| this-is-silence chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
I like this one! I almost passed it by because I saw a number and I hate numbers and math and won’t have anything to do with them! Joking…
But this was such a fun word play. I like how you wrote from the perspective of…a card. Very unique.
Have you ever seen the movie called 21 with Jim Sturgess? So good.
| foreverandeversoul chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
I LIKE IT I THINK ITS REALLY UNIQUE AND CUTE
| 3M2R chapter 1 . 10/18/2010
I simply adore this poem /hugs/
Talking about life using a deck of cards. Novelty, novelty.
but, the second last line...?
"combust"? Cards can't combust, can they? Maybe replace it with something that cards can do? Maybe get burnt to ashes or torn to bits? Something along those lines. Just throwing a suggestion.
the first three was pretty (:
The fourth strayed a little, but gave a new opinion of spade. Spade, referred to as the master of cards, is now used to dug earth for water. cool one there.