|Reviews for Humiliate|
| XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
i know many people like this.
some people do it for the feeling of being superior.
others...many people have problems at home, or someone who hurt them before.
there are people like this, and sometimes it is not their fault the way they are.
but then...there are those people who do it...just cus...well, no one knows.
i like this. a collection of thoughts that run through everyone's heads.
| HighOnBrokenWings chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
There's not enough kindness in the world! We definitely forget that sometimes. This was nice. The rhyme was a little too much, but eh, that's just me.
"Taunt them, tease them, crumble them into particles of shame"
I really liked that line. It was so destructively descriptive.
| Insanity Streak chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
I love this poem as the truth rejoices! Good job and I totally agree with you. Treat people how you want to be treated; its just common decency.
But onto the poem, the rhyming scheme I find a little all over the place though you have chosen some good words to rhyme with.
Anyways, good job.