Reviews for But
Icestormize chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
Short and sweet. But... awesome :)
Archia chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
I like how you say something, eg. 'I love but' and then say s darker view of it. It's like at first it's all good but then it's not. It really shows how all good things can take on bad forms.
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
Learning the word 'But' is learning pessimism.


I liked this, my favorite part was:

"I speak but,

with knifes,

that tears and stabs."


This says something about a person that has discovered a darker shade of everything. Like, nothing is ever good enough.
Der Adler Des Mondes chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
Nice poem!

It reminded me of what my relatives used to say.

"If you say but, you just disregarded everything you said before it".

(I think disregard means "throw away" or something along the lines right?)
some things just never go your way.

i like this poem.

it's really interesting, this poem.

the first part made me think of a mentally unstable person.

the second part made me think of an assassin. cold, and emotionless

the third part me think of a snarky teenager who's been hurt, and has the intention of hurting, in hopes of feeling better.