Reviews for Through the Human Eye
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 11/11/2010
I loved the first verse. I don't know why, even though it's pretty simple but I was wowed with the way you see things.

"Surface meanings,

shallow words,

beautiful packaging,"

People can be so heartless and cruel sometimes. Yeah, they hide behind masks of friendship and trust while they're only seeking other things.

But from now onwards, open your eyes and your mind to such people. If you've been betrayed too many times to count, you must be able to know the difference.

Don't overtrust, and don't push possibly good people away with your mistrust.

:D
Der Adler Des Mondes chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
*sigh*

You present our modern world.

Why is it that we uphold good values as "good" in movies, books and etc? While in reality hatred, greed and overall cruelness get's you somewhere?

I know people say its a dog eat dog world...but can't we have a world where people feel safe? and best of all happy?

"Awake from these lies,

breathe some fresh air,

sense some honesty,

will that day ever cross our way?"

I feel that day will never come in my lifetime nor in humanity's.
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
i like it.

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i saw one show, where people were debating whether lying was alright in some cases.

these kinds of things are confusing to think about.

i've never known hate. i have been lucky so far, and no one close to me has died, and i have not known war.

i know nobody who really knows hate.

i think i will love my world, because it is the way it is, and...

this is where i live.

i'm just being optimistic now.

i am a lucky person.