Reviews for Options
D.S.M.F chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
I really liked this. At first it seemed like it was an attack on religion but as I got toward the end I had a feeling where it was heading.

A good message, I'm not religious but I understood the moral of the story and I agree.

A mistake I noticed. I expect it's a typo anyway:

"I seat next to a stranger"

and personally I would change:

"nobody is out there to control situations and make things alright?"

to read, to make things "right"

It reads a little easier in my humble opinion.

But great job.