Reviews for UnFortunate Me
Campion41 chapter 24 . 4/3/2011
Yay! Great story! I love it!
Campion41 chapter 19 . 4/3/2011
Again, I'm not sure if you care any more, but my favorite female character is Adele, my favorite male character is Patrick, my favorite line... ? I like the entire story! I have only gotten up once since I began reading this, I just can't seem to peel my eyes away! My favorite pairing is Adele Patrick, and my favorite scene is Delilah and Alec making cat noises! D
Campion41 chapter 6 . 4/3/2011
I know this was chapter was posted a long time ago, but if you still care, my favorite male character is Patrick and my favorite female character is probably Sophia... Ha ha, totally just kidding about Sophia. What a brat. My favorite female character is Aurora. I love that name, too! ) Great writing! D
MyDarlingAlice chapter 24 . 1/31/2011
awesomeful!
Seb2.0 chapter 24 . 1/31/2011
What? Aw it's over! So this is a combo review... Hehe!

So, first thought, I FREAKING LOVE MILO! Too bad he brought Saffron. Gross. MIZ FOREVER BABY!

Aw Alec is a high schooler. Good thing he won't be gone, really.

Summer love

Can't wait for the visit with Delilah. I love her!

Gotta cute this short, ravioli is on the table. Heck yes! I'll be looking for (Un)Lucky Me :D Great job, Susie!
Seb2.0 chapter 22 . 1/28/2011
Okay, this may sound dumb, but what IS a scrapper?

YES YES YES! GET HER, ADELE! GET SOPHIA! Heh heh heh. :P

Oh, yeah. Might I just add:

That last line from Milo makes me love him even more. No joke. I didn't think it was possible, but, apparently, it is! Yay! :D
Seb2.0 chapter 21 . 1/27/2011
I know you like long reviews and all, but it'd be easier to write more if the chapter was longer... ;) Jk. Kinda.

So, first sentence: Well, I read it and understood and I yelled "Halleluah!" (Or however you spell it) and then I did a happy dance. That's why it took so long for me to read and review. Plus this guy I like was talking to me and took priority... But anyways. :P

Aside from being a video game freak (I suck at video games...) Delilah is a lot like me. Go figure.

"(He has naturally dirty blonde hair, but dyes it black.)" Yeah, I kind of died of happiness when you said this, cause that means he basically sports both of my favorite hair colors. Heck yes! (I die of happiness a lot... Hm, maybe I should check my blood pressure)

"I… I broke up with Fala," he admitted.

Yet another happy dance. Yes, it was VERY neccesary. You of all people should understand. Now if only Milo would dump Saffron... :P

Somehow, I can see Fala going out with what's his face the bully. Dunno why. Just thought of that. Don't think you have to put that in now. I'm not even sure I'd like the pairing. It just popped in my head and I wanted this review to be long like you asked so I'm filling up space. Ugh, I had bad punctuation there but I'm too lazy to fix it...

Woo! Adele is the same age as all her friends now! :D

Hehehe poor Pat. He blinded Adele. It's probably just cause he's so cute... ;D

More Ack! You make me so happy!

Ha! You SO deserved that rock Sophia! And the fact that Alec threw it makes it even cooler... Hehehe! So, you know, good job and all that stuffs. :)
MyDarlingAlice chapter 20 . 1/24/2011
Embarrassing pictures on a blog for revenge? MUAHAHAHA! *cough* er... that's very immature... very bad.. *softly* Muahaha...
Seb2.0 chapter 20 . 1/24/2011
ACK ACK ACK! AH I love Patrick SO much! Plus the fact that they were watching Star Wars makes it, like, ten times better.

Yes! I hate Fala, ugh. Glad Alec is gonna get rid of her. She may be nice but she's no Delilah, man. Delilah knocks your socks off, just by existing. She's that cool.

Sophia, you may be a- well I can't say it here, but you sure are the snazziest evil charachter, aside from all those Disney villians.

:O MILO! Yay! Except that he's with Saffron. :( But hey, at least he made an appearance! Every time he's in the story, a little part of me dies of happiness. Yeah, Milo is a beast.
Seb2.0 chapter 19 . 1/20/2011
Favorite male character? MILO! Hehehehe! I also like Alec and Patrick but Milo kicks butt, man.

Favorite female character? Hmm hmm hmm... Delilah? She's pretty amazing. Also Adele.

Favorite line? Crap. How can I come up with one? Let's go with favorite line from THIS chapter.

"Good," he said. "If Sophia gives you any more trouble, just let me know. I'm not above hiring some of the seniors to jump her."

Favorite pairing? Hmm it's a tie between Allilah, Ack or Miz (Milo and me hehehe)

Favorite scene? In this chapter? Alec and Delilah making cat noises during the fight bahahaha!
MyDarlingAlice chapter 18 . 1/19/2011
Wuv ur story! totally describes my 6th grade year, except not as much art and not a boarding school... now i feel old.
Seb2.0 chapter 18 . 1/19/2011
Yay! Is this almost over? :( Oh no! Well, at least that means that Falec will be history.
Seb2.0 chapter 16 . 1/14/2011
Aw I love Alec so much now! Even more than before! (Milo is still at the top though)

I wonder what the comment that really set him off was about...?
Seb2.0 chapter 15 . 1/14/2011
-Sigh- Still forcing me to log in? It's ruining my street cred, I'm telling you.

Chapter was good. Poor, poor Patrick! It was hecka funny though. Too bad he didn't say he liked red hair! Eh? Mwahahaha!

Dear Patrick, STOP DENYING YOUR TRUE LOVE!
Seb2.0 chapter 14 . 1/13/2011
I posted Hide... Btw, All I have to say is:

NO AUGH NO WHY ME WHY ME WHY WHY WHY NO
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