Reviews for A Crush
Lorraabe chapter 3 . 1/11/2011
Nice chapter three!
Lorraabe chapter 2 . 10/21/2010
Wow! Your writing improved in this poem compared to the previous ones! But I still love how you're able to write out small details that makes "Stalking" much more cute and nice! ;P I love it! Keep writing!
Lorraabe chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
Heh, girl! Your poem is filled with so cute little small details like:

"My eyes always looked for him"

"I try to dress nice Just incase he saw me"

But there's a little mistake:

"I hoped he was attracted to him"

I think you meant "I hoped he was attracted to me"

Heh but it's realy cute! You should write more!