About the issue of Robin's age, that Once Upon a Story introduced, I reckon that in the crusades there might have been boys as young as twelve, around about fifteen in the war, or at least serving as pages or squires. It would have been kinda rare to be a knight before you were at least eighteen, I think, unless the title was hereditary (for barons, I think).

It's a pretty good story, kind of bland in the first chapter (it's hard to describe, maybe lacking in dimension?), but the second chapter cliffhanger was pretty awesome.

Anyhow, I hope you won't stop updating, like I think you did for the Sky High story on fan fiction net, (which by the way was a really exciting/suspenseful one).

On an unrelated note, how old are you (just curious cause of your user name)? And no, I'm not an old fat guy eating Cheezels and trying to chat up little children on the internet.

I can't wait to read the next chapter. Though I do have to say that I think their ages are a bit young. I don't think Robin would have gone to war at 15, could you maybe make him a little older...maybe 18? It's up to you as the author, that is only my opinion. I'm really enjoying the story and hope you continue with it.

I love it! You have captured them beautifully. Have you seen the BBC Robin Hood tv series? I was soo happy to see you had included Much. He's one of my favorite characters and is sadly not in many of the Robin Hood stories I've read. I can't wait to read the next chapter.