Reviews for Pack
Xandrea chapter 5 . 2/20/2011
This story is very...interesting. It's quite original I must say. I like it. A lot actually. I can tell it's going to be very enjoyable. You're quite talented. I can't wait for the next update. :)
jess chapter 5 . 2/12/2011
OMG Come on Come on! update update! oh and '11cina24 aka cassbeastbomb' Giovanni is speaking Italian not Spanish can't u tell difference? Jeez! Anyway please please please update! We know u don't read reviews but fingers are crossed, I love this story!
11cina24 chapter 3 . 2/11/2011

Like, it's soo frickin' orginal and I love how great you are at describing how she feels towards every one of them(:

Oh, and if you ever need help on some spanish, you can ask me.

Just for editing info if you were to ever go back and edit this story fully when you're done, it's actually spelled preciosa, and bella corpo is actually cuerpo bella;P

Your welcome.

broken-pixie chapter 5 . 2/11/2011
It's pretty good, definitely different :)
violet-eyez chapter 5 . 2/10/2011
oh my
Mononoke Lynn chapter 5 . 2/9/2011
Mononoke Lynn chapter 4 . 2/9/2011
"...when did I let things get so...heavy"

First thought "Gravity's got nothing to do with it." (This is what happens when you read stories at 1 am! _)

Mononoke Lynn chapter 3 . 2/9/2011
I heard a soft groan behind me as Joe lean forward and whisper in my ear, "Damn darlin' your ass sure does feel good where it's seated", I quickly started to move off of his lap when he grabbed my right hip and growled, "No no darlin' I love it…hell I'm damn near addicted to it, stay where you are."

OMGosh, laughed at that line! I would have looked at him and said "Awkward!" and tried to get off too. It helped break the utter seriousness surrounding Jasmine. Always good to throw in a dash of comedy.
Mononoke Lynn chapter 2 . 2/9/2011
Oh my!
Mononoke Lynn chapter 1 . 2/9/2011
Oh man! _ Six werewolfies! This is gonna be interesting...
MiseryLovedHer chapter 5 . 2/5/2011
well i definitely like this story (: cant wait for all the rest of the chapters!
Jess chapter 5 . 2/4/2011
I love this story! This is the kind of story I've been looking for! And don't listen to that asshole Tomoe Kawaji he can go stuff it, I went to that guy's homepage and he has one sub par story about a horrible father who sales his daughter. Totally unacceptable and he shouldn't critize others when his story has grammatical errors as well.

Write on girl! Update soon!
A-JINX chapter 5 . 2/4/2011
this story is awsome plz keep writing and update soon!

lovejim4ever chapter 5 . 2/4/2011
love the story, hope you update soon.
aniH120 chapter 5 . 2/4/2011
Thank you for continuing this story! i loved this chapter! the plot just keeps getting interesting. cant wait 4 your next update!
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