Nice! Definitely has promise.

I love this! Please update soon!

Really interesting! Update soon!

I like how you've constructed this story and set up the six guys and one girl. With easing the girl into it instead of it just all happening at once. I like it, nad I'm excited to read more.

I'm jealous of this girl. It's a pretty good start, I'm excited to see what happens next. Keep it up!{:

love it :)

Six sexy men...lucky, lucky. xD More details in this and the background is satisfactory for a beginning.

Closure is always good. :D

Caught my attention...

So I'm intrigued, I really like the idea of a Mecca pack and overall your descriptions and attention to detail. I'm curious though to see how it works out with six fully grown wolves and one human woman? I mean they all are smitten with Jasmine and I’m sure they’ll want to keep her close. I just wonder how its going to work out and I’ll find out if I keep reading. Already, there was a slight peek at some jealously from John. And from what I've read and gathered from the way you've depicted your male characters they ALL seem VERY territorial and possessive. Going to be quite interesting to see how everything pans out. Anyhow, I'm sticking around to see how the 'Pack' works out. Major cool points to Jazz though, because honestly I don't EVEN know how I'd be able to handle myself around such succulent men. I'll end my comment here I tend to ramble.

This is such a interesting beginning. Can't wait to see more

I like the concept and can't wait to read more. :)

Like the work, like the story, like the idea, and like the characters. Want to know more about them and the past. Now for the negatives which I can only find one: A few grammatical errors and words mixed up. Other than that Great Job.

fascinated with this story and hope you can update soon with chapter 3.

Very interesting concept you have going. looking forward to reading more.