Freaking amazing! Loved it all. I hope you update soon, i cant wait for Joes claiming.

the end of this chapter i just couldn't help but start laughing (my little cousins were looking me like 'The F is wrong w/ her?') xD I couldn't help it cause if i were her i would be red in the face w/ each passing word xDDD so far i LOVE this and i can't wait to get back and read more :3

Loved it! Keep it up! Can't wait for more! Lol she must have been exhausted!

I love it soo far. Keep these chapters up!:)

I do declare! *fans self*

yay! another claiming- pure bliss*

LOVE how Pack is coming along so far.

keep writing & update soon

A-Jix

I love it update soon!

Wow that was hot

Updates! And what a glorius update it is! Luv!

Oh I love it! Ur such a good writer! Can't wait to read more please please update soon! I cant wait to see how this all turns out! I'm in love with all the guys lool! Please update! Thanks :)

Ok First I love the story!

Now I'm French, live in Paris and it does bother me to read the mistakes in French.

"Amant" is lover but only for a guy, it's a masculine word, never ever used for a woman. (maîtresse might be more appropriate)

Something else: we say "MON amour" (mi is Italian I think)

"Mon bien aimée" is for a guy again, for a girl we say "Ma bien aimée.

CurieuSE petite fille instead of curieux.

We say "tu es belle MON amour"

ok and finally to say "feels so good", we could say "C'est si bon" because "Sent si bon" means "Smells so good"

Hope that helped, I didn't mean to be annoying just helpful!:)

Cheers! Céline

I love this story! I cant wait for the next chapter.

I can't wait for the next chapter, it almost worth the wait...

Jasmine's really lucky!

pease update really soon!:)

A-jix

Continue, continue! :D But let me get this straight, she spent 4 months with just John correct?

YAY! you're back! I'm so happy you kept going. I can't wait for the next chapter. I can't wait for some multiple lovin!