Reviews for Pack
lovejim4ever chapter 10 . 1/25/2012
Freaking amazing! Loved it all. I hope you update soon, i cant wait for Joes claiming.
PheonixSakura13 chapter 2 . 1/25/2012
the end of this chapter i just couldn't help but start laughing (my little cousins were looking me like 'The F is wrong w/ her?') xD I couldn't help it cause if i were her i would be red in the face w/ each passing word xDDD so far i LOVE this and i can't wait to get back and read more :3
Flowergirl7 chapter 10 . 1/25/2012
Loved it! Keep it up! Can't wait for more! Lol she must have been exhausted!
11cina24 chapter 10 . 1/24/2012
I love it soo far. Keep these chapters up!:)
Mononoke Lynn chapter 10 . 1/24/2012
I do declare! *fans self*
A-JINX chapter 10 . 1/24/2012
yay! another claiming- pure bliss*

LOVE how Pack is coming along so far.

keep writing & update soon

MackenzieElizabeth97 chapter 9 . 1/24/2012
I love it update soon!
sherrylynn chapter 9 . 1/21/2012
Wow that was hot
Mononoke Lynn chapter 9 . 1/18/2012
Updates! And what a glorius update it is! Luv!
Flowergirl7 chapter 9 . 1/18/2012
Oh I love it! Ur such a good writer! Can't wait to read more please please update soon! I cant wait to see how this all turns out! I'm in love with all the guys lool! Please update! Thanks :)
janeanist chapter 9 . 1/18/2012
Ok First I love the story!

Now I'm French, live in Paris and it does bother me to read the mistakes in French.

"Amant" is lover but only for a guy, it's a masculine word, never ever used for a woman. (maîtresse might be more appropriate)

Something else: we say "MON amour" (mi is Italian I think)

"Mon bien aimée" is for a guy again, for a girl we say "Ma bien aimée.

CurieuSE petite fille instead of curieux.

We say "tu es belle MON amour"

ok and finally to say "feels so good", we could say "C'est si bon" because "Sent si bon" means "Smells so good"

Hope that helped, I didn't mean to be annoying just helpful!:)

Cheers! Céline
luvjim4ever chapter 9 . 1/17/2012
I love this story! I cant wait for the next chapter.
A-JINX chapter 9 . 1/17/2012
I can't wait for the next chapter, it almost worth the wait...

Jasmine's really lucky!

pease update really soon!:)

Moon Sage chapter 8 . 1/17/2012
Continue, continue! :D But let me get this straight, she spent 4 months with just John correct?
BookLover4Ever chapter 9 . 1/17/2012
YAY! you're back! I'm so happy you kept going. I can't wait for the next chapter. I can't wait for some multiple lovin!
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